Task 44: Pitch Evaluation

This is the email my teacher has sent me which includes what needs to be improved on 

Overall the feedback we got from our pitch was good. Our story board, risk assessment, audience detail was good because it was detailed and easy to understand. However their was a few areas were we was lacking such as the production schedule, sound design and location. Also we need to improve on our presentation skills and our organisation skills because the pitch was disorganised.

Three Targets we must complete before filming
1. Complete sound design task
2. Finalise the production schedule
3. Finalise the props task