Rough cut 1: feed back evaluation (Nathan)

Improvements to make:
The feed back from the class and the teacher was very useful. it gave me insight into the key components of our rough cut that i personally did not recognise whilst editing the footage. For example when the teacher mentioned that there was a shaky scene. i didn't realise that it was noticeable until she mentioned it and i looked back over the footage. Below i will present a list of the things i need to fix before further editing and how i will go about doing it.

Jump Cut:
crop the video and sync the ring tone sounds to make it integrated
Shaky Frame:
cut the shot a bit earlier so the shakiness is not noticeable
Cutting around the car:
make the cuts a little shorter in the shots where the car is parking up